editing comments for a project

so I have a capstone project which I wrote and I will be working on it for the next 3 months. all I need is someone that when my professors give me feedback you change them and edit them ( i am not really good with writing )
as of now, they need me to fix my abstract at the end and add more literature review

because they want me to fix my methodology and I will do it myself
I wrote 2 here with red colors. just focus on them and leave the rest of it for me