Attached, you will notice an LA city municipal code. The text is very jumbled and disorganized. Use brevity to edit down the message, revise it for clarity and dramatically reduce the size and wordiness of the document. Remember to edit out as much of the text as you can while still retaining the core components (or essential main point) of the message. When you’ve finished, type your response into a Word doc.
VERY HELPFUL TIPS!
–You can take all of this jumble and reduce it to only one mere sentence and still make your point without losing the essence of the message.
–Keep in mind this municipal code is only asking us residents of LA not to do one thing, and one thing only.